thatguy04 Posted February 28, 2004 Share Posted February 28, 2004 Although I wrote this for my class, it was kinda inspired by a girl I know, and some of you may of heard of as well: Summer's Day and Winter's Night Do you wish to know how my heart feels now? It always feels for you in deep warm ways. But do you really want to find out how? Then hear, this is all my heart has to say To me you're my summer day's rising sun With your burning light making things brighter And making my whole day able to run Because my stress and worries are lighter But with each sunrise must come a sunset And when it comes, things become much colder For with summer's day, winter's night is met And the dark and cold become much bolder So if you were to take my summer's light Then I'd be left in winter's dark cold night Link to comment
Anamarie89 Posted February 28, 2004 Share Posted February 28, 2004 Gorgeous I loved the contrast from day to night, summer to winter, 'specially loved the last two lines Link to comment
thatguy04 Posted February 28, 2004 Author Share Posted February 28, 2004 Thank you, its nice to hear someone likes it . I just hope my teacher feels somewhat the same way. Link to comment
neva_black_n_white Posted February 28, 2004 Share Posted February 28, 2004 i like the comparisons and meaning to each line, it was really nice and im guessing the girl would have also took a great compliment from it also. with the last two lines, if she is to make your summer bright, im assuming shed be with you and you holding her, but if winter is to be such a drastic change isnt that an assumption that the relationship or love wouldnt last so long? i get a little confused with sonnets. kel Link to comment
thatguy04 Posted February 28, 2004 Author Share Posted February 28, 2004 Well, to be honest, I havent told the girl yet, and we really havent been in a relationship except as good friends, I just have a crush you could say on her. I will tell her soon though, really . Link to comment
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