neva_black_n_white Posted February 1, 2004 Share Posted February 1, 2004 hey erveryone, the poem in itself wont make sense i dont believe its a mixture of feelings rammed into one page. LIFE IS A LEARNING PROCESS i sit down and listen you stand there and glare you scream at me with aggression yet no other emotion is there i asked you questions was given answers in return how do you walk away from the answer youve now learnt? you never knew what to do you never wanted to hear you never new the meaning all you had was fear i gave you my honesty i gave you my life i gave you the opinions youd always wanted, right? you heard the words you listened to me cry you watched me give passion for one thing and the other to die what was it that led you what led you to hurt what was the meaning of this anger what did you want first? the ending was the hardest for a new had to begin you knew now in your heart that you did notwin you saw the anger from before knew now the opinion you saw what was the meaning you saw what was the beginning you were the one who wanted to go back take back what you had done wanted to share things that were too late give what you knew you had the reason for these beliefs created such diversion love is a powerful thing created mainly for learning however as soon as you know the answer as soon as you feel the pain as soon as you understand the anguish it starts once again why ask a question with one meaning to later find more why do you ask a question shutting several doors? i knew one of the answers yet still i continue to learn my heart is nothing but broken yet i still long to yearn to forget is to delay to bring back something once had theres nothing you can do by hurtful memories that you have already had walk away now and it will return for life is a process that we will all remain to learn. i dont think i want a responce, its just the way an ex made me feel today. stupid really, you think your over something then you realise how much memories mean. you cant hide and if you do you just become weaker in doing so kel Link to comment
just_smile Posted February 2, 2004 Share Posted February 2, 2004 hey neva i really liked your poem, i know you dont want any responses but i thought that i would just to let you know what i thought of it, great work, keep it up ~LJ =; p.s i liked stanza 2 Link to comment
SarCareBear Posted February 2, 2004 Share Posted February 2, 2004 confusing, but so are emotions... but comeon... love is created mainly for learning??? whatev Link to comment
neva_black_n_white Posted February 3, 2004 Author Share Posted February 3, 2004 its my opinion no need for your responce. do you want to tell me that you dont leran from love? you havent gained anything, if you can answer either of those with no you havent then fair play, have your opinion but if you have to say yes you have learnt from it then reframe from answering the post next time when i said i didnt a responce, it was my means of venting on a really bad day. thanks for topping that one! and just_smile thanks for your opinion. kel Link to comment
take_the_reins Posted February 5, 2004 Share Posted February 5, 2004 hey neva_black_n_white, i know u didnt want any replys .. but i just have to say how beautiful your poetry is! please keep us updated with anymore poems you do ! Thanks ~hopskotch~ Link to comment
neva_black_n_white Posted February 5, 2004 Author Share Posted February 5, 2004 thanks for the positive post love! *hints to the poster before* sure ill keep you updated, its a damn shame though that i have to be down to write them, still. thanks, i like to hear positive responces. kel Link to comment
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