mellybelly Posted October 20, 2008 Share Posted October 20, 2008 Tears spill on to the pages, letting the words of ink swirl into one another. the words that I wish I could say to you, the words that feel so unheard and neglected, they swirl off the page ever so gently. they swirl out from my heart searching to make their way to where you wait. Link to comment
floating_away Posted October 20, 2008 Share Posted October 20, 2008 Your use of visualizations really gets your feelings accross. A lot of us probably have things we would like to say to someone, but can't for some reason or another. Frustrating feeling. Link to comment
tiredofvampires Posted October 20, 2008 Share Posted October 20, 2008 I can just picture this, melly....it makes me feel really, really sad. As it should. Link to comment
mellybelly Posted October 21, 2008 Author Share Posted October 21, 2008 Your use of visualizations really gets your feelings accross. A lot of us probably have things we would like to say to someone, but can't for some reason or another. Frustrating feeling. thank you floating... yes, it's probably one of the most frustrating feelings ever. that's why i think we shouldn't hold back on what we are thinking to say when we have the chance. Link to comment
mellybelly Posted October 21, 2008 Author Share Posted October 21, 2008 I can just picture this, melly....it makes me feel really, really sad. As it should. Oh TOV. I wish I could write happier things. The saddest part is that Michael ignited so much happiness in me. And now I am left feeling so sad. : / "The saddest part of a broken heart, isn't the ending as much as the start." -Feist Link to comment
redrose85 Posted October 21, 2008 Share Posted October 21, 2008 I have to write a repetitive/rhyme poem in that style. Thanks for inspiring me a bit I really like that one, it's powerful in a quiet way. Link to comment
mellybelly Posted October 21, 2008 Author Share Posted October 21, 2008 I have to write a repetitive/rhyme poem in that style. Thanks for inspiring me a bit I really like that one, it's powerful in a quiet way. oh awesome! thanks love. I'm glad I could inspire you a bit girl. : ) post your poem on here when you're done! Link to comment
Beoslasher Posted October 24, 2008 Share Posted October 24, 2008 the words that I wish I could say to you, the words that feel so unheard and neglected, That part really hits home to me. Its very beautiful, and quite sad Thank you for again writing another great work that lets helps heal. -Beo Link to comment
raining.stars Posted October 26, 2008 Share Posted October 26, 2008 Love it, so poetically beautiful and melodic like music Link to comment
tiredofvampires Posted October 27, 2008 Share Posted October 27, 2008 Oh TOV. I wish I could write happier things. The saddest part is that Michael ignited so much happiness in me. And now I am left feeling so sad. : / "The saddest part of a broken heart, isn't the ending as much as the start." -Feist Oh, but it's important to write about the sad things, too, and you've done it with such a soft and penetrating voice. This is quite a simply a gem. I hope you've got another soon, your poems always make me feel just what you're feeling. Link to comment
sprockets Posted October 28, 2008 Share Posted October 28, 2008 cool poem. really creative. Link to comment
hodgo Posted October 31, 2008 Share Posted October 31, 2008 thank you floating... yes, it's probably one of the most frustrating feelings ever. that's why i think we shouldn't hold back on what we are thinking to say when we have the chance. i love this so simple and short but so powerful and u could have pullled that straight out of my heart. i have this feeling but i hold back saying what i want to because experience has taught me that things can go shockingly and tragically wrong and i dont want to lose not the thing i have but the thing i could have in the future with him. so precious. Link to comment
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