My poem, My thoughts..........

[brahman]

This is just running out

This time is running

And we run with it

This time, is not just leaving

This is no race

It's an illusion,

is there

is not........When we stop, time stops, time continues.

 

 

Time does not go back.

I will not find my spirit, when there is no spirit

I would rather die with no spirit than a spirit that is not there.

A shell would be too simple, though I do love the sea, and all those empty shells. I think I'd like fish much less than the a bird free as the air.

 

 

I lost my thought, but this is what blew threw my head. If you can spot what my poem is about I applaud you, but if not in a week or so I will respond to this post and tell you what its about.

[brahman]

It's about finding the love of your life..............

[Brittanyxvx]

Wow.

The relation, words and how they tie in are excellent.

Nice freeflow.

 

Kind of like when the wind touches your fingertips. =]