justagirl Posted December 9, 2003 Share Posted December 9, 2003 Hey everyone, first of all thank you in advance for reading my post. I read through the poems section and was amazed at the talent floating around. It really is amazing how our emotions get words flowing like they do. So, I guess this is just my avenue to release some pent up emotions. Thanks again and feel free to comment, whether positive or negative. *~I wrote this around the beginning of October~* Unexplainable feelings Overcoming my brain Inescapable emotions Driving me insane Irreplaceable years Each taken away Unresolved issues Haunt every day Irresistible calmness Centered in destruction Undeniable attachment Influencing every function Unacknowledged existence Filling my heart Undisputable confusion Brewing the start Unexplainable feelings Driving me insane Inescapable emotions Overcoming my brain ~*~*~ ~*I wrote this in October*~ Some things never change, in my life anyway I go through the seconds it seems like yesterday Repeated and repeated nothing new starting Days turn into years old never parting Loveless life, alone on Friday nights Holding back the tears I hold on to fight Expanding new relationships others I've sewn Never enjoying a relationship of my own. Living everyday as if my life doesn't matter Climbing higher and higher on my lonely ladder Something new occurs making everything so great I get so caught up it's already to late It turns to be not as good as I thought This is my life, oops I forgot Nothing good is really what it seems Maybe this guy is all in my dreams I thought maybe this was my chance Maybe my life wont be empty of romance Things are perfect when the lines are connected These feelings are new, not before collected. Tears welling up, I'm holding them back I'm not good for him, there's something I lack Making me a better person, learning my faults Why when I talk to him my confidence halts Trying to keep my feelings keeping them dim Don't want to make things frustrating for him Thoughts going through my mind, fast pace Can't think of anything concretely, only his face Understanding that maybe things aren't that bad Could I have overreacted, it's making me mad I feel so confused I was comfortable before Keeping things to myself, locking the door Maybe this is what I needed, someone with a key Helping discover why it's been just me Confusion runs wild all through my mind I only want one answer, only one to find I look to a day as one not like the one before Nothing can be repeated, everyday a new door Some things never change, in my life anyway Then I looked back to yesterday… ~*~*~ *~I wrote this for my senior scrapbook for English*~ Everyone says it goes by all too fast, the fun and the parties won't always last. I never could quite understand what they all were saying, I thought it lasted forever, the music wont stop playing. But it's almost ending and has been such a blur, so many things to do, so many things I wish I were. You always expect to be a totally different person when you leave this place, different feelings, different lifestyles, a different face. Some get that wish and embark on a magical trip into their lives forever, some of us didn't get to finish the journey together. My experience was full of memories and tears; I lost many things I had had for years Friends disappeared and many things were lost, but I have learned that it's all worth the cost. The lessons have been taught and the bonds have been broken, now its turn to take what's known and let it be spoken. When we leave what we've known and who've we been around for so long it's hard to go our own ways, but I'll always remember this door is opening to magical days. We will all be together whatever we may be in the memories we've shared and made, the love and friendship from one to another wont ever fade. Everyone always said it goes by real fast, I never understood until I had to look back to the past. ~*~*~ And I am done, 8) Justathought, Justagirl Link to comment
just_smile Posted December 9, 2003 Share Posted December 9, 2003 wow i thought that all three we amazing, they were deep with emotion and i think that you have a great talent. keep writing, and keep us posted ~LJ =; Link to comment
neva_black_n_white Posted December 9, 2003 Share Posted December 9, 2003 hey. im pretty much speechless and thats a first, im really impressed, surprised you didnt get them up here sooner lol. great use of words and just_smiles is right, man that was deep. if i had to pick a favorite. it would be the second poem. great work. kel Link to comment
justagirl Posted December 9, 2003 Author Share Posted December 9, 2003 Hey thanks you 2 I'm flattered! Justagirl Link to comment
Osiris Posted December 21, 2003 Share Posted December 21, 2003 Greetings Justagirl, Nice poetry! Osiris. Link to comment
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