vp83 Posted April 12, 2008 Share Posted April 12, 2008 An old poem that I wrote years ago and have revised a few times.. not the best in my eyes, but I was always proud of it. I'd like to share and see what others think. ------------------------ Bullets and Stars ------------------------ Like a killer on the run Oh, blind sniper What have I done... Even beside you I am aimless I study every motion As your bullets break the sky Smashing into stars, yet Not a tear from your blind eye I find myself here wishing Upon every dying star My dreams end by your bullets Yet I know not who you are I find myself here placing Broken stars upon the shelf I find myself here wishing But I never find myself And damn you, crescent moon.. Why can't you turn my tide You just watch blind snipers' Bullets and stars collide 1 Link to comment
TENNFOLD1974 Posted April 12, 2008 Share Posted April 12, 2008 Very interesting.You seem to have a knack for poetry,good job. Link to comment
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