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An old poem that I wrote years ago and have revised a few times.. not the best in my eyes, but I was always proud of it. I'd like to share and see what others think.



Bullets and Stars



Like a killer on the run

Oh, blind sniper

What have I done...

Even beside you I am aimless



I study every motion

As your bullets break the sky

Smashing into stars, yet

Not a tear from your blind eye


I find myself here wishing

Upon every dying star

My dreams end by your bullets

Yet I know not who you are


I find myself here placing

Broken stars upon the shelf

I find myself here wishing

But I never find myself



And damn you, crescent moon..

Why can't you turn my tide

You just watch blind snipers'

Bullets and stars collide

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