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[musicguy]

Screaming inside,

tearing me from within,

shadows lurk behind me.

Nowhere to run,

nowhere to hide.

 

You left me

torn and shattered,

bruised and battered.

loss of hope or happiness.

wondering who you are now

where did the old you go?

 

Broken hearted

shattered soul,

but I'll be back,

better than ever,

better than you'll ever be.

The strong survive

 

musicguy©2007

[Jeen]

Don't know what to say but WoW.

 

Thanks

[musicguy]

Don't know what to say but WoW.

 

Thanks

 

Why thank you. What do you think my poem is about?

[Jeen]

Getting control of your emotions and feelings, and learning from them to be a stronger person in life.

 

I hope??

[musicguy]

Yup, that's right!

[Jeen]

I do love your poems. I can relate to sow many of them but it is hard to sometimes put it in words and thank you after you did such a good job in writing them.

[musicguy]

awwww!! thank you. I've been writing poetry since I was in 14

[Jeen]

I do love your poems. I can relate to sow many of them but it is hard to sometimes put it in words and thank you after you did such a good job in writing them.

 

My computer have a mind of it's own and had to post this post again.

[musicguy]

hehe, it's okay

[dqueen]

Yes, never let the enemy win. As they say, living well is the best revenge.

 

Brilliant poem! Thanks for sharing.

[CallingAllAngels]

another excellent poem...especially like the 2nd verse.....

 

~Allie