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  1. Ha, I didn't mean to end it with a comma. But I'm glad you like it. Thanks!
  2. I write really different than the conventional poets. I always like to write something that can provoke a literal emotion. Comment and let me know Thanks. Love/Fate Becomes Reality. Control of the emotion of being in love is fate, For fate is the control of the emotions we seek, It is only when we break free of this bondage we know, And we can only be settled with the emotion of lust, How is lust the muse in which we fall upon as right, We can only become victims of fate to settle for less, Instantly freeing ourselves from constant intellectual fallacy, We as humans glide with the knowledge of right and wrong, It is within our blood to feel what we feel, to hope and kneel, So slay fate upon the fiction it is known to interpret, Kill all conscious intuition to seek what cannot change, It is us who make the choices that ultimately hurt, And it is us who make the choices that free us from pain, Fate is nothing but a prison, a lie, an excuse to let go, But, what if OUR fate is to do what we feel? To seek the great creation of the opposite affection, Now, fate, in this case, is we should believe in, For love/fate is not what we hope that we become, It is what we undeniably create,
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