BandNerd1001 Posted January 4, 2005 Share Posted January 4, 2005 It would be great if I could get some help. I love to write poems, but when they are love poems I cant write them. Is there someone how could take information i give you and could possibly write the poem for me? Thanks so much. Infoomation: This guy and i met through a friend of mine a year ago.Well live about 2 or more hours away from eachother, so we talk on the phone and internet. when we do talk on the phone it will the least of an hour. We talk the most on the internet though. Before we got to be good friend he used to be depressed and stuff like that, i love talking to him, it just makes me happy. there was this one time that i was sick and i had taken some nyquil med. so then he called him his nyquil princess, and i made a sn out of it. That touched him. Now when ever we say bye he is like, "g'night your majesty." Hes just really sweet, and he actually talks on the phone unlike other guys. We always talk about how and when we are going to meet up one day and hang out b/c we live few hours from eachother and we both cant drive alone yet. We talk about going to arcades and fun places like that because i am into fun things like that. He told me, "you are like the perfect g/f a guy could want, you play video games and you hang with the guys, your not girly, and you not afraid to try new things." well thats about everything I got. PLEASE help me if you can. It would be wonderful. Thanks and love ya. Link to comment
acts12 Posted January 4, 2005 Share Posted January 4, 2005 I have no idea............I heard if you start out with 'roses are red, violets are blue............' it works out ok. ha. maybe a good place to start. Please dont take me serious. Best advice? hmmmmmm...be creative. Link to comment
nosoul Posted January 4, 2005 Share Posted January 4, 2005 just write about how you feel .and it should come easly like tuen on some music and sit there at a desk in your b urself and write how you feel.And it should just flow out!!! i hope that works thats what i do cya have fun!! Link to comment
BandNerd1001 Posted January 4, 2005 Author Share Posted January 4, 2005 yes that is what i am doing right now. lol. Now i am stuck. i am I wanna say something with like me being the princess and maybe a part with him of prince/charming or just normal guy... and like where he told me i was the perfect g/f with the video games and all that, then welll just give me some idea if you cant think of anything, if i had ideas of what to put i can work with it. Roses are Red, are Violets Blue? Maybe its true, I'm I falling for you? A voice so soft, I have not forgotten. A personality so great, I know its fate. Link to comment
asdf Posted January 4, 2005 Share Posted January 4, 2005 roses are red violets are blue i hope you love me because i love you (copyright asdf 2005) Link to comment
BandNerd1001 Posted January 4, 2005 Author Share Posted January 4, 2005 needs to be original Link to comment
Amethyst Posted January 4, 2005 Share Posted January 4, 2005 A poem written by someone else can never actually convey what *you* feel. Any poem you write for him is going to be very special to him, no matter how poorly written you believe it to be. It isn't the meter or rhyme that really matters -- it's the thoughts and emotion conveyed. Instead of giving him a poem written by someone who doesn't even know the two of you, just write what's in your heart. If he loves *you*, then he'll love *it*. I promise. Link to comment
BandNerd1001 Posted January 5, 2005 Author Share Posted January 5, 2005 Mmk Tell me what you think. I finally finished it. Roses are Red, are Violets Blue? Maybe its true, Am I falling for you? A voice so soft, I have not forgotten. A personality so great, I know its fate. A passion for music, Now I can't resist. A guy filled with humor, I can't stop laughing. A guy who knows how to have fun, I'll challenge you to that. A guy who is strong enough to be down, I am here to help lift those weights. A river flowing to sea, Slow it goes. Just like love is meant to be. Link to comment
Warrior_Poet Posted January 5, 2005 Share Posted January 5, 2005 Your poem is awesome! I was going to suggest that you relax and remember that it does not have to rhyme; start by creating romantic images. If you become overly focused on which word will rhyme, it can create an interesting word puzzle but fail to convey the emotions you are longing to share. It appears you already took my suggestion before you even heard it Link to comment
From_Now_On Posted January 8, 2005 Share Posted January 8, 2005 BandNerd1001: Hey there. Well, I was in the mood to write but had no idea what to write really, and then I saw your post. So I took some elements of what you had and tried to build you a poem. Unfortunetly it did not turn out like I hoped. "Love" is not my area of expertise. But, I did still think I'd let you see it. Goodnight Your Majesty Your voice is so soft I have not forgotten --Just like the music we love And I could never get enough I remember when you were so sad When all that you could find--was the bad But the closer we grew The more I knew Love's the simple little things That lighten our hearts and lend us our wings Love's talking on the phone for hours Or chatting away til' nothing seems wrong Love's silly little jokes --Like flowers That make the days seem less long And when I go to sleep you'll say to me Goodnight--your majesty With us we live life like royalty Love's everything I'd dreamt it'd be Link to comment
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