troublegal05 Posted December 26, 2004 Share Posted December 26, 2004 Addiction to ones lonely heart percieves to be the fool relished in his pleasure she holds a picture to a past in which she cannot decode She searches for an answer a note to unleash a doubt deep within her a passionate touch to lock a future nothing more than a cliche shadow onto which she has been taken to The pedals lie to a seducted truth taken to the grounds of envy, deciet, and denile She awaits the judges of the winds to fortell her future love Link to comment
fallslikerain Posted December 27, 2004 Share Posted December 27, 2004 I like it, cool poem Link to comment
boredguy Posted December 27, 2004 Share Posted December 27, 2004 amazing poem. I admire your way of having a rythm without having to lose the comlpexity of the poem by making it rhyme. Link to comment
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