You

[godisucksobadly]

Your eyes are like the the moon,

shining with an everlasting glow.

Your hair flows like the mane of a horse,

beatiful yet bold.

Your face is chizzled out of stone,

meant to be seen for generations.

Your body is like a Vango painting,

mysterious and vivacious.

You are the perfect you,

the best in the world.

Your voice is like the singing of the angels,

the sweetest of harmonies.

You are the perfect you,

for me.

 

 

--my sn in rockerlife4ever if you want to tell me about this or give me ideas. also reply on here cuz im not always on

[JoyieGracie]

Very discriptive."You are the perfect you,

for me. " is very clever

[From_Now_On]

I like it a lot. If you wrote it about someone in particular...that person is lucky to be seen in such light. It sounds like you have a real eye for beauty. Nice job.

[neva_black_n_white]

hey, i really liked your poem, i can relate to it in the sense that i feel someone can be your perfect, and you love them for their qualities, faults everything about them. i think your poem is either explaining that or atleast explaining it in some way and i think it was really well written.

 

kel.

[ksk0_0]

Very good poem ^^ I liked it.

Loved the part "You are the perfect you... for me"

Make more like these and no sad/broken up ones pls ^^