MissMandaJo Posted November 15, 2004 Share Posted November 15, 2004 My mind is like a cage Thoughts of you I disengage To retain my sanity I could have lost the key With that my conscience may disagree In here, there is no vanity On my own I strive to stand I want you out, but the door is jammed Disencumbering a memory isn't easy The harder I struggle, the deeper you go To the core of my mind you infect and grow I'm beginning to think the imprisoned one is me In my heart I want you gone By a single strand I barely hold on That strand is my bond to you Suppose that strand should never break Accepting the truth and accepting the fate That being apart is the underlying virtue Link to comment
troublegal05 Posted November 15, 2004 Share Posted November 15, 2004 I thought your poem was good.....(keep up the good work) Link to comment
thatguy04 Posted November 15, 2004 Share Posted November 15, 2004 Cool poem, really deep. If you have more, I plan to read them, good job. Link to comment
behind_these_eyes Posted November 16, 2004 Share Posted November 16, 2004 that was amazing. seriously. keep it up. Link to comment
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