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[EmptySoul]

she works all the time

to hide from all the screaming

to hide from her life

but can't she see-

this is the life she chose

and it's too late now to change it all

if you choose hell, it's yours

 

he works all the time

to hide from all the speaking

to hide from everything

but can't he see-

this is the life he chose

and it's too late now to change it all

if you choose damnation, it's yours

 

i am here all the time

and i won't hide

you hide from me.

can't you see-

i am me because of the life you chose

but it's not too late for me to change it all

i choose him, and he is mine...

 

Empty

[Protex]

Very well done.

 

Keep writing!

[i_hate_the_world47]

Amazing poem emptysoul.Bravo.

 

~meagan~

[bilal72401]

awsome poem, i enjoyed it alot, very well done!!!

keep writing

[Gauchori]

I like it 8)

[ForAnother]

Very nice!