lil_unique_me Posted September 7, 2004 Share Posted September 7, 2004 YOU!!! Having you near me, Having you hear me, Having you love me, Having you want me. It's all i could ever want, all ive wanted for a long time But you look at me And i make you sick! i make you sick to your stomach you can never love me, You can never want me, You can never be near me, You can never hear me. Time after time. Day after day You hate me You wish i was dead Well guess what so do i! ME and YOU I looked for you and you werent there your eyes are hollow You just stand and stare Into my eyes You look right through me I wish i could make you see What that look does to me It makes me feel so much pain the knowledge that i cannot erase the feeling of hopelessness that enters your face I love you so much i just want to help you today you cant help yourself ive lost all hope in you It's over, its gone, FOREVER!!! DADDY Daddy i love you Daddy i care Daddy come back top me Daddy i need you Daddy im sorry Daddy dont hurt me Daddy why do you hit me Daddy dont you love me? Daddy please stop! Daddy why? Daddy your making me cry Daddy get off me! Daddy why do you punch me? Daddy why do you kick? Help me mummy See what Daddy does! Please!!!! Link to comment
nothingontheinside Posted September 7, 2004 Share Posted September 7, 2004 thats awesome u obvisouly have some talent for writing, keep it up Link to comment
Gauchori Posted September 7, 2004 Share Posted September 7, 2004 Wow girl I really liked those peoms. Specially the second one. But I have to tell you this... you stol a part of the poem I'm writing! aww man... Oh well... Umm... really good but I'm still going to keep writing my poem the way I was going to By the way... thanks for sharing the beuty of poetry with us an I hope you check out my poems to 8) Link to comment
hardcore Posted September 8, 2004 Share Posted September 8, 2004 i liked them but i never really liked my dad lol hardcore Link to comment
i_hate_the_world47 Posted September 9, 2004 Share Posted September 9, 2004 Well,those were wonderful poems.I liked the first one best.Also you said you have been away,so welcome back ~Meagan~ Link to comment
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