dpressedone89 Posted September 3, 2004 Share Posted September 3, 2004 bleeding the truth cutting through the lies broken wings of grace darkness, no surprise the light comes out and fades the clouds away smiles rise from dust turned on by passing day the truth you give so simple killing cold all the lies the truth shown clear on your face the love i see in angels eyes im broken inside but you fix me up tight tears may spring from my eyes sometimes you have to fight problems seem so big in you stare cut to size nothing can compare to the love in angels eyes -stitches aka The Antihero oppinions? comments? critiscism? any feedback appreciated Link to comment
i_hate_the_world47 Posted September 3, 2004 Share Posted September 3, 2004 tainted soul,you dumb.That was an extremely rude comment,that wasnt nesccasry. dpressedone89, wonderful poem.I truly enjoyed it.Bravo. ~Meagan~ Link to comment
mystery Posted September 3, 2004 Share Posted September 3, 2004 that was a very uncalled for post. yeah on the outside it does look like another suicide or cutting poem, but you can obviously tell that he is talking about a women....but that does take atleast one brain cell to realize... any wayz, i thought it was really good. ur a great writer. Link to comment
under_the_pressure Posted September 3, 2004 Share Posted September 3, 2004 I didn't see taintedsoul's reply but whatever. I really liked this poem. good job. under* Link to comment
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