tainted_soul Posted July 10, 2004 Share Posted July 10, 2004 i accept your reservations rennovating crumbling chambers under under never saying softly naiads bleed the water now in time eternal bliss leave you cold without her kiss there was never a place like this now we stop, in time we miss please don't tell her i never hurt her i never felt her i never broke her not like you would i should stop you you're the one who's hurting her it's your fault all your fault would you please turn off the god damn TV Link to comment
nothingontheinside Posted July 13, 2004 Share Posted July 13, 2004 like it... =D> very good, very much emotion and very powerful. keep up the good work Link to comment
jaiva Posted July 29, 2004 Share Posted July 29, 2004 I'm a little confused but it seemed as if there are lots of emotions shown. Jaiva Link to comment
i_hate_the_world47 Posted July 30, 2004 Share Posted July 30, 2004 Wonderful poem. Meagan Link to comment
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