tainted_soul Posted June 20, 2004 Share Posted June 20, 2004 in silence the walls begin to bleed when everyone has stopped and everyone is moving and everything is still and the silence can't be heard and you start to wonder whether they notice it because everyone is so still and everything is so dark a voice starts to say things in the background and you feel the floor cold or carpet you cannot tell someone falling like the world falling away and someone somewhere whispers to another "something somewhere secretly suffers" and you fall no longer hearing no longer seeing no longer feeling what you've never felt before to go where there is no comfort where the sick cry out in pain and the silence fills the void to close your eyes and no longer feel ... so numb Link to comment
dpressedone89 Posted June 20, 2004 Share Posted June 20, 2004 hey awesome poem. kinda scary and totally dark the part about feeling numb i loved it your poem. you r talented. keep up the good work -stitches Link to comment
avustt Posted June 20, 2004 Share Posted June 20, 2004 beautiful poem only very depressing Link to comment
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