pLEASE rEAD && hELP ME DEciDe My pOeM tiTLe.

[Anonymos]

You put a smile on my face

until you said you were leaving

you seemed so careless

and gave me NO reasons

 

To tell me you need space

is basically telling me we're over

don't give me those lies

give me some damn closure!

 

Some time will pass

and you'll realize what your missin'

Then i want u to come back

and realize wat your NOT gettin'

 

I've learned what you have done

and you know i don't like to share

so we can never have a solid realtionship

as i'd prefer both people to care

 

I am not being hateful

in fact i dont hate you one bit

for you have taught me a life lesson

i won't ever stand for this S ** T !!!

 

 

I love to write poems and this is my first time posting one here..I actually just wrote this specially for ENA!! I can't think of a title i want to give it...any suggestions would be nice.

[Greedy Toad]

Thanks for sharing

 

As for a title, not sure, doesn't need one really

[Anonymos]

Thanks, Yeah i guess Its self-explanatory.

[g84]

hi, i picture a title like "Closing the door", something similar to that. : ]

I'm not sure if that's a good suggestion, but it's what came to mind.

[Anonymos]

That is a great suggestion...thats def. whats happening in this poem. Lol.

[DadaJones]

How about " Closing the A-B Rhyme Scheme", this way you make it alittle ironic too.

[Anonymos]

Hahhaha..i love ironies......&& Thanks, I like it too.

[JonasWaingaro]

Like the poem. Can't think of a title really, maybe 'space is for astronauts, not relationships!' hehe Just how I feel these days, too.