trying2007 Posted December 21, 2007 Share Posted December 21, 2007 Inside You tell me you don’t know You say you are not sure You feel something amiss Your love no longer pure, Time is what you have asked Space is what you crave Love is what you desire, Love is what would save, Like the morning sun Touching you for the first time Each morning giving new hope That life will give us a sign, Just look down deep Deeper than you have ever You will see the love The love that you thought never, Never would have shown Had you not asked For I have found love inside That forever was masked, If you could look into my soul You could tell me you’re sure if you give our love a chance You could tell me you know TJ Link to comment
NO1GR8r Posted December 25, 2007 Share Posted December 25, 2007 Inside You tell me you don’t know You say you are not sure You feel something amiss Your love no longer pure, Time is what you have asked Space is what you crave Love is what you desire, Love is what would save, Like the morning sun Touching you for the first time Each morning giving new hope That life will give us a sign, Just look down deep Deeper than you have ever You will see the love The love that you thought never, Never would have shown Had you not asked For I have found love inside That forever was masked, If you could look into my soul You could tell me you’re sure if you give our love a chance You could tell me you know TJ Hey there Buddy! This is a nice poem but let me ask if things have taken a turn? It reads with a tone of hope and uncertainty. Maybe I am wrong. I am hoping that all is well with you based on this. Link to comment
trying2007 Posted December 26, 2007 Author Share Posted December 26, 2007 This poem was written 3-4 weeks ago while we were apart, and thats why it has that tone. I gave it to her in a book yesterday and she was very appreciative about it. I wanted her to know what i was thinking and going through as well as how i have grown through all this. I wrote another too that i gave her as well as some other writings for her. Things are still good, we are taking it slow Link to comment
NO1GR8r Posted December 27, 2007 Share Posted December 27, 2007 This poem was written 3-4 weeks ago while we were apart, and thats why it has that tone. I gave it to her in a book yesterday and she was very appreciative about it. I wanted her to know what i was thinking and going through as well as how i have grown through all this. I wrote another too that i gave her as well as some other writings for her. Things are still good, we are taking it slow Ok. It is good to know. And I hope that your holiday was good for you both. Link to comment
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