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Just beautiful. Congratulations for knowing how to put your feelings in words, since it is the most difficult thing for many of us.

Really really great word play, I absolutely loved it.

After All

by Peter Cetera

Well, here we are again;

I guess it must be fate.

We've tried it on our own,

But deep inside we've known

We'd be back to set things straight.

I still remember when

Your kiss was so brand new.

Every memory repeats,

Every step I take retreats,

Every journey always brings me back to you.

CHORUS

After All the stops and starts,

We keep coming back to these two hearts,

Two angels who've been rescued from the fall.

After All that we've been through,

It all comes down to me and you.

I guess it's meant to be,

Forever you and me, After All.

When love is truly right

(This time it's truly right.)

It lives from year to year.

It changes as it goes,

Oh, and on the way it grows,

But it never disappears,

CHORUS

Always just beyond my touch,

You know I needed you so much.

After All, what else is livin' for?

CHORUS

It seems we're ok

Kissing,hugging all the night

It really seems we're perfect

But we know it's just a lie

Yet we keep on pretending

Never let anyone see

The truth beyond our laughs

The scars beneath our skin

It's Heaven

for others.

It's just Hell

for us.

But it's better to think you're loved

Is it more than enough?

We're in this together

And we both know what's right

But the love that we're sharing

Left me with no will to fight

I'm screaming when I'm lonely

I smile when we're out

And when you come and kiss me

It does feel really right

But what about the pain?

What about the lies?

They can't be deleted

They're not just in our mind

We always had good times

That were more than the bad

But yet we keep pretending

Like we've only began

You bruise me ,then you kiss me

And tell me "You were right"

But the pain I feel then

Can't be ripped apart

You can't just smile at me

And delete all my scars

You can't go on pretending

Cause I'm too left behind

We need to show ourselves

We need to tell our pain

Else we'll be 'in love'

But lonely at The End.

Four walls don't help a broken heart

Neither do words left unspoken

Turning your back on sadness

Isn't the best thing

But at least you're happy

I thought it was about us

Me and you ,remember?

But then I realized it was more about you

And I was the sad face taking the picture

Why did you left me alone?

With the tears in my eyes

Why did you thought I was better without you?

When my heart has been shattered

Tryed to be strong

And never shed a tear

But when your soul is bleeding

You need someone to mend it

you could've done that

But you were too caught up in your own life

Our life became a habit

And habits can be easily lost

You smile

With a spiteful grin.

Then your face gets red

And then you cry

With those lying tears

And your eyes get dark

You're the king of pretend

You don't fool me

You smile with a grin

I smile

With my pretty face

I want to laugh

Your tears

Now they don't have a chance to fool me

You think you can manipulate me?

Think again

Everytime you cry

You make me smile

Evrytime you look at me

I just look at you

With my frozen eyes.

No

Break-up wasn't my end

Nor my mascara isn't running anymore

I just smile

And wait for your grin.

You don't even know when heartbreak is going to hit.Not talking with the person you love can be very hurtful cause...you feel like you gotta know what they're doing in their everyday life.It hurts but...maybe she'll come back...maybe she'll accompany you from now on.Great poem

I can truly find myself through your poem.So powerful...fll of emotions.Great job!Keep surprising us

It still hurts!!!

Maybe it's not too often...but it's not easy

Maybe it's better this way...but it's so hard to explain

Maybe my heart is beating faster when you're around...but I'm afraid to do this

Maybe I should've told you from the start....but what if you laughed?

Maybe I should tell you more often...but what if you thought it was a joke?

Maybe it's easier like this...but you're making it harder...

Maybe it's easier for you...but it's getting me down...

Maybe you know better...but what if you lie?

Maybe you tell me too often...but I forgot too quick?

Maybe you should prove me...but you don't know how...

Maybe you should help me...but you're waiting for me to ask...

Maybe you had enough...but what if hope still exists?

Maybe you're thinking how it is to be me...but what if we don't match?

Maybe it would've been easier if it happened from the start...but what if it's too early?

Maybe it's too late...but I still feel the same...

Maybe it's hard for me to tell you "I love you"...but what if you understand?

Extremly passionate love I see sparkling through this poem.Pure definition of passion I must say.Great job!!!

This is a poem I just made...it's for my boyfrind..who I love so much....but he hurt me,broke my heart...so I'm sending this to him,even if he'll never see it...This is for you hun : Just show me that you love me,cause I still love you!!!

It's up to you

To make me stay

I don' want to leave

So don't just pray

Pray for forgivness

Cause this time I won't

won't just believe

all of your lies

But now as I stay

Lost in this day

Your words hit my heart

and I fall apart

I trusted you

I loved you

I still love you

but the trust is away

Why did you do

do this to me

You said "I love you"

now how could this be?

how could you lie

and how could you cheat

You had all of me

now you made me bleed

I'm looking at you

but I don't believe

the sweet lies you tell

how can this be?

I still love you

Love you more than you know

but if I surrender

I'm afraid I will fall

So tell me now

if you love me

Prove what you say

and we will still be

Black light,Lost soul,Trapped innocence,Silent scream ...or somehtign like this.Good?

If it's inspired formyour life then I'm sorry that you had to pass through such pain.I hope you are better.But even if it's just a poem or a poem taht describes your life I must say to you that it is amazing and it has so many mixed emotions in it that really take my breath away.Many hugs and keep up the good work!

I kind of feel like in the poem.Feeling like you;'re the only one fighting for an *US* is really hurtful..but sometimes you need to fight more so you can win in the end...I guess..

Your poem is great on my belief!I wonder if it's for someone...

I wonder how many peopel find theirselves through this lyrics...I know this is kind of my story unfortunately

These are NOT my lyrics ,they belong to Usher and the song is "Burn"

[intro]

I don't understand why

See it's burning me to hold onto this

I know this is something I gotta do

But that don't mean I want to

What I'm trying to say is that I-love-you I just

I feel like this is coming to an end

And it's better for me to let it go now than hold on and hurt you

I gotta let it burn

[Verse 1]

burnin' for me to say this

But it's comin from my heart

Its been a long time comin

but we done been fell apart

I really wanna work it out

But I don't think you're gonna change-e

I do but you don't

Think it's best we go our separate ways

Tell me why I should stay in this relationship

When I'm hurtin' baby, I ain't happy baby

Cuz there's so many other things that I gotta deal with

I think that you should let it burn

[Chorus]

When the feeling ain't the same and your body don't want to

but you know, gotta let it go

cuz the party ain't jumpin' like it used to

Even though this might bruise you

Let it burn

Let it burn

Gotta let it burn

Deep down you know it's best for yourself but you

Hate the thought of her being with someone else

But you know that it's over

We know that its true

Let it burn

Let it burn

Gotta Let it burn

[Verse 2]

Sendin' pages I ain't supposed to

Got somebody else but I want you

Cause the feelin ain't the same

find myself

Callin' her your name

Ladies tell me do you understand?

And all my fellas do you feel my pain?

It's the way I feel

I know I made a mistake

Now it's too late

I know she ain't comin back

What I gotta do now now

To get my shorty back

Ooo ooo ooo ooooh

Man I don't know what I'm gonna do

Without my boo-ooh

She's been gone for too long

It's been fifty-leven days, umpteen hours

Im'a be burnin' till you return

[Chorus]

When the feeling ain't the same and your body don't want to but you know

Gotta let it go cuz the party ain't jumpin' like it used to

Even though this might bruise you

Let it burn (let it burn, let it burn, you gotta, it burn)

Let it burn (gotta let it burn)

Gotta let it burn

Deep down you know its best for yourself but you

Hate the thought of her being with someone else

But you know that it's over

We know that its through

Let it burn

Let it burn

Gotta let it burn

[bridge]

I'm twisted cuz one side of me is tellin' me that I need to move on

On the other side I wanna break down and cry (ooooh)

I'm twisted cuz one side of me is tellin' me that I need to move on

On the other side I wanna break down and cry (cry)

[breakdown]

Ooh ooh ooh ooh ooh oooh

Ooh ooh oooh (can ya feel me burnin'?)

Ooh ooh ooh oooh ooh oooh

too many days, so many hours

I'm still burnin' till you return

[Chorus]

When the feeling ain't the same and your body don't want to,

but you know gotta let it go cuz the party ain't jumpin' like it used to

Even though this might bruise you

Let it burn

Let it burn

Gotta let it burn

Deep down you know it's best for yourself but you

Hate the thought of her being with someone else

But you know that it's over

We know that its true

Let it burn

Let it burn

Gotta let ït burn

Her being sad?Why?Cause she didn't had an orgasm whiole * * * *ing those guys?Oh come on...Forget here!Find a girl who deserve's being treated like *gold*...And don't worry...karma always makes its presense felt .Take care!@

It is cheating.My bf did it on me too.And I forgave him.He still says it isn't called cheating.Right...and who will believe hem?Imagine...you wouldn't found out...whould he told you in he future?Cpourse not ,cause he was doing something *behind* your back.And everything that is done concerning other persons of the opposite sex when you;re in a stable relationship and that don't have the consent of your so called lolved one...is cheating.What if it was on-line?there is always a start to everything...On-line talks behind someone's back is just as bad as real cheating.Oh the hell with it ...I'm talking here with my broken heart...

It just happened to me...I discovered my bf (we've been 2gether for a year) had *many* convo's with sluts on mIRC.Sex talks ...so I'm hurt and I'm trying to make it work with him again.Don't know where we'll go from here,what we'll do...if we can live the way we were....I'm very hurt.it derstroyed my trust in him and now I even think that he cheated in real life.

sorry guys but I can't tell him "do not do that " ta na na .He's not usually using my account ,it just ahppend for him to be in my seat on the PC .Don't get upset on me ,please ! I didn't intentioned any of that .I offer my honest apologiez for whatever I may have caused with my mistakes.[-o

So I'll post it here ,this is my *own* poem so I hope you all like it ..don't expect much I am not an expert

So thursty...

How long is the road that leadds me to you

And how thursty I am...

It's sad!

Even the clock on the wall is sad

cause there's no one there to tell him

To stop its seconds

Till you come...

Oh...how many miles till I can reach you

And how thursty i am...

From time to time

I put my hand on my chest

and I feel how my soul

Curls up at the emptiness

that's biting my memories

Oh the aches in my soul

Trap my heart

When the rain falls

From the wall...

And I don't even know anymore!

And the night

is guarding my windows

And the flower from the table

Has faded

And my herat is telling me

That the wind of someone else's smile

Goes through your hair...

*this* is it...I made it when I found out something that my bf did...heh I guess the pain helps me in some way.

Btw I will past my own poems soon and you'll see a very big difference .I ain't the barbie doll type with cute sweet poems haha

Lol guys don't worry that wasn't my poem and my bf posted the "may I blush" .I took it from...link removed I think ,don;t remember well but I didn;t signed it with any name cause I didn't know the name of the writer .And don't be sarcastic for nothing

May I blush?

I shave my legs, I sit down to pee.

And I can justify any shopping spree.

Don't go to a barber, but a beauty salon.

I can get a massage without a hard-on.

I can balance the checkbook,

I can pump my own gas.

Can talk to my friends, about the size of my ass.

My beauty's a masterpiece, and yes, it takes long.

At least I can admit, to others when I'm wrong.

I don't drive in circles, at any cost.

And I don't have a problem, admitting I'm lost.

I never forget,an important date.

You just gotta deal with it, I'm usually late.

I don't watch movies, with lots of gore.

Don't need instant replay, to remember the score.

I won't lose my hair, I don't get jock itch.

And just cause I'm assertive, Don't call me a

Don't say to your friends, Oh yeah, I can get her.

In your dreams, my dear, I can do better!

Flowers are okay, But jewelry's best.

Look at ME you idiot... Not at my chest????

I don't have a problem, With Expressing my feelings.

I know when you're lying,You look at the ceiling.

DON'T call me a GIRL, a BABE or a CHICK .

I am a WOMAN.

Get it?, you !!