illusionglimps

Just beautiful. Congratulations for knowing how to put your feelings in words, since it is the most difficult thing for many of us.

Really really great word play, I absolutely loved it.

After All by Peter Cetera Well, here we are again; I guess it must be fate. We've tried it on our own, But deep inside we've known We'd be back to set things straight. I still remember when Your kiss was so brand new. Every memory repeats, Every step I take retreats, Every journey always brings me back to you. CHORUS After All the stops and starts, We keep coming back to these two hearts, Two angels who've been rescued from the fall. After All that we've been through, It all comes down to me and you. I guess it's meant to be, Forever you and me, After All. When love is truly right (This time it's truly right.) It lives from year to year. It changes as it goes, Oh, and on the way it grows, But it never disappears, CHORUS Always just beyond my touch, You know I needed you so much. After All, what else is livin' for? CHORUS

It seems we're ok Kissing,hugging all the night It really seems we're perfect But we know it's just a lie Yet we keep on pretending Never let anyone see The truth beyond our laughs The scars beneath our skin It's Heaven for others. It's just Hell for us. But it's better to think you're loved Is it more than enough? We're in this together And we both know what's right But the love that we're sharing Left me with no will to fight I'm screaming when I'm lonely I smile when we're out And when you come and kiss me It does feel really right But what about the pain? What about the lies? They can't be deleted They're not just in our mind We always had good times That were more than the bad But yet we keep pretending Like we've only began You bruise me ,then you kiss me And tell me "You were right" But the pain I feel then Can't be ripped apart You can't just smile at me And delete all my scars You can't go on pretending Cause I'm too left behind We need to show ourselves We need to tell our pain Else we'll be 'in love' But lonely at The End.

Four walls don't help a broken heart Neither do words left unspoken Turning your back on sadness Isn't the best thing But at least you're happy I thought it was about us Me and you ,remember? But then I realized it was more about you And I was the sad face taking the picture Why did you left me alone? With the tears in my eyes Why did you thought I was better without you? When my heart has been shattered Tryed to be strong And never shed a tear But when your soul is bleeding You need someone to mend it you could've done that But you were too caught up in your own life Our life became a habit And habits can be easily lost

You smile With a spiteful grin. Then your face gets red And then you cry With those lying tears And your eyes get dark You're the king of pretend You don't fool me You smile with a grin I smile With my pretty face I want to laugh Your tears Now they don't have a chance to fool me You think you can manipulate me? Think again Everytime you cry You make me smile Evrytime you look at me I just look at you With my frozen eyes. No Break-up wasn't my end Nor my mascara isn't running anymore I just smile And wait for your grin.

You don't even know when heartbreak is going to hit.Not talking with the person you love can be very hurtful cause...you feel like you gotta know what they're doing in their everyday life.It hurts but...maybe she'll come back...maybe she'll accompany you from now on.Great poem

I can truly find myself through your poem.So powerful...fll of emotions.Great job!Keep surprising us

It still hurts!!! Maybe it's not too often...but it's not easy Maybe it's better this way...but it's so hard to explain Maybe my heart is beating faster when you're around...but I'm afraid to do this Maybe I should've told you from the start....but what if you laughed? Maybe I should tell you more often...but what if you thought it was a joke? Maybe it's easier like this...but you're making it harder... Maybe it's easier for you...but it's getting me down... Maybe you know better...but what if you lie? Maybe you tell me too often...but I forgot too quick? Maybe you should prove me...but you don't know how... Maybe you should help me...but you're waiting for me to ask... Maybe you had enough...but what if hope still exists? Maybe you're thinking how it is to be me...but what if we don't match? Maybe it would've been easier if it happened from the start...but what if it's too early? Maybe it's too late...but I still feel the same... Maybe it's hard for me to tell you "I love you"...but what if you understand?

Extremly passionate love I see sparkling through this poem.Pure definition of passion I must say.Great job!!!

This is a poem I just made...it's for my boyfrind..who I love so much....but he hurt me,broke my heart...so I'm sending this to him,even if he'll never see it...This is for you hun : Just show me that you love me,cause I still love you!!! It's up to you To make me stay I don' want to leave So don't just pray Pray for forgivness Cause this time I won't won't just believe all of your lies But now as I stay Lost in this day Your words hit my heart and I fall apart I trusted you I loved you I still love you but the trust is away Why did you do do this to me You said "I love you" now how could this be? how could you lie and how could you cheat You had all of me now you made me bleed I'm looking at you but I don't believe the sweet lies you tell how can this be? I still love you Love you more than you know but if I surrender I'm afraid I will fall So tell me now if you love me Prove what you say and we will still be

Black light,Lost soul,Trapped innocence,Silent scream ...or somehtign like this.Good?

If it's inspired formyour life then I'm sorry that you had to pass through such pain.I hope you are better.But even if it's just a poem or a poem taht describes your life I must say to you that it is amazing and it has so many mixed emotions in it that really take my breath away.Many hugs and keep up the good work!

I kind of feel like in the poem.Feeling like you;'re the only one fighting for an *US* is really hurtful..but sometimes you need to fight more so you can win in the end...I guess..

Your poem is great on my belief!I wonder if it's for someone...

I wonder how many peopel find theirselves through this lyrics...I know this is kind of my story unfortunately These are NOT my lyrics ,they belong to Usher and the song is "Burn" [intro] I don't understand why See it's burning me to hold onto this I know this is something I gotta do But that don't mean I want to What I'm trying to say is that I-love-you I just I feel like this is coming to an end And it's better for me to let it go now than hold on and hurt you I gotta let it burn [Verse 1] burnin' for me to say this But it's comin from my heart Its been a long time comin but we done been fell apart I really wanna work it out But I don't think you're gonna change-e I do but you don't Think it's best we go our separate ways Tell me why I should stay in this relationship When I'm hurtin' baby, I ain't happy baby Cuz there's so many other things that I gotta deal with I think that you should let it burn [Chorus] When the feeling ain't the same and your body don't want to but you know, gotta let it go cuz the party ain't jumpin' like it used to Even though this might bruise you Let it burn Let it burn Gotta let it burn Deep down you know it's best for yourself but you Hate the thought of her being with someone else But you know that it's over We know that its true Let it burn Let it burn Gotta Let it burn [Verse 2] Sendin' pages I ain't supposed to Got somebody else but I want you Cause the feelin ain't the same find myself Callin' her your name Ladies tell me do you understand? And all my fellas do you feel my pain? It's the way I feel I know I made a mistake Now it's too late I know she ain't comin back What I gotta do now now To get my shorty back Ooo ooo ooo ooooh Man I don't know what I'm gonna do Without my boo-ooh She's been gone for too long It's been fifty-leven days, umpteen hours Im'a be burnin' till you return [Chorus] When the feeling ain't the same and your body don't want to but you know Gotta let it go cuz the party ain't jumpin' like it used to Even though this might bruise you Let it burn (let it burn, let it burn, you gotta, it burn) Let it burn (gotta let it burn) Gotta let it burn Deep down you know its best for yourself but you Hate the thought of her being with someone else But you know that it's over We know that its through Let it burn Let it burn Gotta let it burn [bridge] I'm twisted cuz one side of me is tellin' me that I need to move on On the other side I wanna break down and cry (ooooh) I'm twisted cuz one side of me is tellin' me that I need to move on On the other side I wanna break down and cry (cry) [breakdown] Ooh ooh ooh ooh ooh oooh Ooh ooh oooh (can ya feel me burnin'?) Ooh ooh ooh oooh ooh oooh too many days, so many hours I'm still burnin' till you return [Chorus] When the feeling ain't the same and your body don't want to, but you know gotta let it go cuz the party ain't jumpin' like it used to Even though this might bruise you Let it burn Let it burn Gotta let it burn Deep down you know it's best for yourself but you Hate the thought of her being with someone else But you know that it's over We know that its true Let it burn Let it burn Gotta let ït burn

Her being sad?Why?Cause she didn't had an orgasm whiole * * * *ing those guys?Oh come on...Forget here!Find a girl who deserve's being treated like *gold*...And don't worry...karma always makes its presense felt .Take care!@

It is cheating.My bf did it on me too.And I forgave him.He still says it isn't called cheating.Right...and who will believe hem?Imagine...you wouldn't found out...whould he told you in he future?Cpourse not ,cause he was doing something *behind* your back.And everything that is done concerning other persons of the opposite sex when you;re in a stable relationship and that don't have the consent of your so called lolved one...is cheating.What if it was on-line?there is always a start to everything...On-line talks behind someone's back is just as bad as real cheating.Oh the hell with it ...I'm talking here with my broken heart...

It just happened to me...I discovered my bf (we've been 2gether for a year) had *many* convo's with sluts on mIRC.Sex talks ...so I'm hurt and I'm trying to make it work with him again.Don't know where we'll go from here,what we'll do...if we can live the way we were....I'm very hurt.it derstroyed my trust in him and now I even think that he cheated in real life.

sorry guys but I can't tell him "do not do that " ta na na .He's not usually using my account ,it just ahppend for him to be in my seat on the PC .Don't get upset on me ,please ! I didn't intentioned any of that .I offer my honest apologiez for whatever I may have caused with my mistakes.[-o

So I'll post it here ,this is my *own* poem so I hope you all like it ..don't expect much I am not an expert So thursty... How long is the road that leadds me to you And how thursty I am... It's sad! Even the clock on the wall is sad cause there's no one there to tell him To stop its seconds Till you come... Oh...how many miles till I can reach you And how thursty i am... From time to time I put my hand on my chest and I feel how my soul Curls up at the emptiness that's biting my memories Oh the aches in my soul Trap my heart When the rain falls From the wall... And I don't even know anymore! And the night is guarding my windows And the flower from the table Has faded And my herat is telling me That the wind of someone else's smile Goes through your hair... *this* is it...I made it when I found out something that my bf did...heh I guess the pain helps me in some way.

Btw I will past my own poems soon and you'll see a very big difference .I ain't the barbie doll type with cute sweet poems haha

Lol guys don't worry that wasn't my poem and my bf posted the "may I blush" .I took it from...link removed I think ,don;t remember well but I didn;t signed it with any name cause I didn't know the name of the writer .And don't be sarcastic for nothing

May I blush?

I shave my legs, I sit down to pee. And I can justify any shopping spree. Don't go to a barber, but a beauty salon. I can get a massage without a hard-on. I can balance the checkbook, I can pump my own gas. Can talk to my friends, about the size of my ass. My beauty's a masterpiece, and yes, it takes long. At least I can admit, to others when I'm wrong. I don't drive in circles, at any cost. And I don't have a problem, admitting I'm lost. I never forget,an important date. You just gotta deal with it, I'm usually late. I don't watch movies, with lots of gore. Don't need instant replay, to remember the score. I won't lose my hair, I don't get jock itch. And just cause I'm assertive, Don't call me a Don't say to your friends, Oh yeah, I can get her. In your dreams, my dear, I can do better! Flowers are okay, But jewelry's best. Look at ME you idiot... Not at my chest???? I don't have a problem, With Expressing my feelings. I know when you're lying,You look at the ceiling. DON'T call me a GIRL, a BABE or a CHICK . I am a WOMAN. Get it?, you !!