mystery

i guess thats would only be helpful if u believed in god, which i for one do not

xmysteryx

amazing, i can only wonder wat happened before u wrote that. awesome poem

awww...u gotta teach david oscar the oscar mayer weiner songs! that would be so cute! ... or atleast in my opinion

btw, i love the names

i do play guitar and it would be neat to start a band...but like my name, id rather have people know about me, but not know me. if i started my own band...then the few indaviduals that respect music enough and listen to the lyrics trying to figure out what they mean, would know part of me that i dont want them to be able to match with a face. i dont know if that makes n e sense to u guys...

thanks for the site. its awesome

a problem with giving it to my friend tho, is that none of my friends know i have n e sort of a problem. what should i tell them when they want an explination about the poem?

wow, thanks. yeah im new at writing...and music practically is my life, but id rather play something someone gave me instead of making my own.

do u think i should give it to one of my friends that just started a band?

but wouldnt the rhyme kinda make it sound like a rap? ((no offense to anyone, but i despise rap))

wow...thats all i can think to say...just wow. =D>

xmysteryx

im pretty new at writing poetry, so please give me ur unbiased oppinion. thanks

its not like you noticed

or possilby cared

i never once thought

that youd show up and stare

out of the darkness

self destruction and fate

you grabbed my remains

but you are already to late

ive already fallen

already stumbled

everything you have tried to save

has precioulsy crumbled

its nothing speciol

nothing ill ever see

is my own lifeless body

right infront of me

as always

xmysteryx

*raises hand* im 14, parents divorced...and the first time my dad had a gf, i was about 6. i didnt like the lady much at all. if you ever saw the movie "au pair" or somethin like that...i was exactly like one of those little kids to her...dont worry, its not you, its us. we dont wana let go of our parents..cause really he probably still has hope that his parents will get back together or something. Even to this day, if my dad has a new girl friend....it takes me a few months to warm up to them...of course i am a girl, and we r talking about a guy...maybe hell be the same way..i dont know. find out if he has aol instant messanger...if he does pm me and ill give you my sn and ill talk to him about it. maybe then he could realize that its really not that bad

as always

xmysteryx

i read in another room earlier about advice to stop cutting and this one person told the cutter to take all the sharp objects, razors, knives away from the spot that they usually cut in and completely despose of them. Im sorry to say...but that tactic is completely worthless. most people that are...addicted...to cutting, can always find something to cut with. even if their surroundings are filled with things that are impossible to break to get a sharp edge, the human nail will always be at-hand. [pun somewhat intended].

I am still looking for a possible way to stop cutting, but ive gotten to the point where i just dont care anymore that i do it. but i did try that way ... and it failed. just wanted to let u all know