tightyo361 Posted July 3, 2004 Share Posted July 3, 2004 **** oh ****, eres tan linda como un rayo del sol, la luz de mi vida, donador de gozo. eres una rosa, tan bella y bonita, que aun las estrellas estan celosas de tu belleza. in english: **** oh ****, you are beautiful like a ray of sunlight, light of my life, giver of joy. you are a rose, so gorgeous and beautiful, that even the stars are jealous of your beauty. tell me what you think Link to comment
just_smile Posted July 3, 2004 Share Posted July 3, 2004 hey i think that it is really nice did you write it yourself? ~LJ =; Link to comment
tightyo1543 Posted July 3, 2004 Share Posted July 3, 2004 yes i wrote it for this one girl, i just didnt know if it was that good or not Link to comment
kali171 Posted July 3, 2004 Share Posted July 3, 2004 If your goal is to win her heart, I think this poem does its job. If your goal is to be the next poet laureate, I would think of some fresher images. Link to comment
just_smile Posted July 3, 2004 Share Posted July 3, 2004 hey i deffinatly think that will do the job, i think it is really sweet. are you going to give it her in english or the other? ~LJ =; Link to comment
tightyo1543 Posted July 3, 2004 Share Posted July 3, 2004 i actually just moved to south america, so the girl i like speaks spanish. well, thanks everyone, i just thought that up in like 2 min. and just wanted to see if it was good or not. Link to comment
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