ember Posted June 1, 2004 Share Posted June 1, 2004 Nightmare Your touch, your taste I can't escape them You won't escape The life you made Now, in your dreams I'll be the nightmare Alone I'll sit there Not unlike The living dead Stop killing me Or, if you must, Kill and let me die Don't make me live For your sick pleasure Just leave me where I lie Now, in your dreams I'll be the nightmare Alone I'll sit there Not unlike The living dead I said goodbye For there I died You touched my heart You gave me life A life I can't escape But the same life you gave You took away And now it kills me Oh, how you've killed me Just leave me where I lay Now, in your dreams I'll be the nightmare Alone I'll sit there Not unlike The living dead ------------------------------- I'd love feedback... thanks Link to comment
tainted_soul Posted June 1, 2004 Share Posted June 1, 2004 that...is a good poem. it's incredibly well expressed and it draws you in. what i love about it is that it's not just some generic poem about death or love or hate or puppy dogs and sailboats...it's about love AND hate and death and depression and... it's slightly creepy and a little spine-tingling. anyway, it's great, keep writing Link to comment
ember Posted June 5, 2004 Author Share Posted June 5, 2004 lol, thanks... maybe I'll try one about love death, AND cute lil' puppy dogs... *grin* Link to comment
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