ember Posted May 24, 2004 Share Posted May 24, 2004 Confessions A heart of gold That's empty and cold Is your disguise So confess all your lies Say goodnight (Sweet lonely sorrow) Don't wanna fight (Just wait 'till tomorrow) Can you see the light? (It's what I desire) 'Cause I've lost my sight (I'll burn you like fire) So just turn away And celebrate The solitude… You've come unglued A heart of gold That's empty and cold Is your disguise So confess all your lies You're alone again And you don't understand How we got this way What happened today? You invoke in me hate (So turn your back again) Is it really too late? (You let it happen) Could fix things this time (But you don't really wanna) If you'd open the gate (Yeah, I guess you're not gonna) A heart of gold That's empty and cold Is your disguise So confess all your lies Link to comment
neva_black_n_white Posted May 25, 2004 Share Posted May 25, 2004 i really liked your poem and the way you built it up with chorus's that was well thought out. i enjoyed reading it. kel Link to comment
Tinkerbell Posted June 11, 2004 Share Posted June 11, 2004 I agree with everyone, it was great! Link to comment
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