lil_unique_me Posted May 13, 2004 Share Posted May 13, 2004 you look at me and say goodbye but i dont want you to go i want to stay here with you your my lifeline your me soulmate your my kissmet and i need you so... so much that it hurts me inside to look at you when you say goodbye those immortal words that mean nothing to you but everything to me they slip off your tongue like rain off an umbrella they wont leave me alone though. please come back to me dont leave me this way dont walk away from me dont turn your back on me i just want to say "I LOVE YOU" Catie xxx Link to comment
Happy_Go_Lucky_Heb Posted May 13, 2004 Share Posted May 13, 2004 Hey Sorry about your breakup, I know they're hard. Hang in there, you never know what tomorrow's got in store! Heb Link to comment
suespoons Posted May 13, 2004 Share Posted May 13, 2004 they slip off your tongue like rain off an umbrella I love this image- it's simply written but says so much. Link to comment
just_smile Posted May 13, 2004 Share Posted May 13, 2004 hey girl! wow that was amazing, i really liked your poem , i agree with suespoons i think that line was really great too. in some ways i can relate, i cant really tell you how, but trust me i can. ~LJ =; Link to comment
lil_unique_me Posted May 13, 2004 Author Share Posted May 13, 2004 thanks people. i dont know if you can tell but it was written so it would reflect on 3 levels. one was a breakup. two was a relationship that i want to heppen and three is the fact that i have just finished my last day of my last year of school ever and im gonna miss my mates soooooooooo much and im soooooooo scared of the big bad world outside of school. youd have to know me personally for this but can you see it now? let me know please Catie xxx Link to comment
just_smile Posted May 13, 2004 Share Posted May 13, 2004 Hey Catie yeh i can see it, i knew what you ment when i read it, good poem, i have read some of your others and i think they are really good too keep writin ~LJ =; Link to comment
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