Daddy Bear Posted August 4, 2008 Share Posted August 4, 2008 one eye - the left - and paint is peeling half a head hits three-foot ceiling claustrophobic cedar steamer trunk magicienne, ventriloquist pretending lies were on his lips justified her lopping off a chunk good plan good act good axe good thunk she took a bow and now her dummy's junk Link to comment
beingbrave Posted August 4, 2008 Share Posted August 4, 2008 That's cool! I really like this one! ALOT!! I have never liked a poem so much! R U getting it published? Link to comment
comfyshoes Posted August 5, 2008 Share Posted August 5, 2008 once again, Sir, you piss all over my own efforts and leave me simply in awe. Link to comment
Daddy Bear Posted August 5, 2008 Author Share Posted August 5, 2008 once again, Sir, you piss all over my own efforts and leave me simply in awe. That's a load of monkey trumpets, strudel. I saw your latest posted work and it was damn sure no thang to peeze at. R U getting it published? Maybe posthumously. I hear that's where the money's at. Link to comment
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