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reisforpeace
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this was a poem but i guess it kinda turned into a song.
(btw im a girl also)
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She drives me crazy
She makes me insane
But with out her
Life would be quite plain
It boggles my mind
And makes me want to cry
I just figured out that
With out her I would die
One problem with this love,
It’s a one-way street.
I want to move on
But I can't lift my feet.
So I’m stuck...
Stuck this way
So I’m stuck...
Stuck this way
I call her a lot,
If she only knew why
I need to talk
But she’s checking out some guy
When she’s depressed
I feel like I’m on fire
Let me ease the pain
It’s her that I admire
One problem with this love
It’s a one-way street
I want to move on
But I can't lift my feet
So I’m stuck...
Stuck this way
So I’m stuck...
Stuck this way
Put a fork in my heart
cause I think I’m done
I don’t know what to do
The pain has just begun
I don’t want to seem needy,
Or too concerned
But she wont let me in
That’s something I have learned.
One problem with this love,
It’s a one-way street.
I want to move on
But I can't lift my feet.
So I’m stuck...
Stuck this way
So I’m stuck...
Stuck this way
I probably bore her
She doesn’t understand
She only sees my surface
where my emotions are canned
I want to hug her tight
And never let her go
I’d do anything for her
Doesn’t she know?
One problem with this love,
It’s a one-way street.
I want to move on
But I can't lift my feet.
So I’m stuck...
Stuck this way
So I’m stuck...
Stuck this way
One problem with this love,
It’s a one-way street.
I want to move on
But I can't lift my feet.
So I’m stuck.
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i just wrote it today so im up for critisism...but mostly i just felt like it was something i had to share.
Just out of my reach
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This is a sonnet that I wrote, please give me some constructive criticism...
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Just Out of My Reach
Love is just out of my reach
I lift my hand and it flutters away
Why won’t love land and stay?
I need it to heal my chest’s only breach
To learn from love so then I can teach
New love will replace the old they always say
Well what if it doesn’t work that way?
Love is hardly as sweet as a peach.
Perhaps you are right before me
So close that I can’t even see.
To nervous to come when I call.
But be brave my love, stand up tall.
Bring faith to those who have lost hope
There still is time to help them cope.