Mister X Dominick

You, man, did well! Cool, congratulations. You know what I wanna say? Maybe you'll try to attend a competition to win a prize for the longest line within a poem? Ha? What do you think? Besides joke, I really appreciate you!!! Keep going.....

MXD

Someone said: "... its a shame that we cant understand spoken words (as silly as that sounds). Still, i enjoyed the poem. great work!"

I do not know will everyone accept my poems, for they are not in English, they are mostly in Russian, sometimes in Turkish and Kyrgyz. But, nevertheless, I do not mind if you kicked me for any of my poems, 'cos you do not understand them thoroughly. Here is another poem in Turkish, but this time I do not have time to translate it into English. Be patient, if any of you would like to read it in English. Hope there are some who are pretty good in Turkish... I say beforehand that this poem was not written by me, I received it form someone. I believe you will like it very and very much, unless you do not understand it at all.

I believe, it is written by the hand of your heart. Your friend is lucky to have such friend....

Yours is the best among those I have read by now...

I am a fairly new memeber of this forum, so I have not read all poems here. But I have read a few, however those poems have niether ryphm nor rythm. Probably, I should read more and then judge. Actually, I have no rights to judge. We are all actors, trying to act as someone else, but in fact we are not. But I liked your poem. It has a poem structure. You are really talanted. Wish you thriving.

I do not know yet will you like it or not, but I have a poem in Russian language. My G.F. wrote it last year.

Но ей хотелось закричать

"Постой! Давай начнем сначала!

Давай попробуем начать!"

Но все таки она так не сказала.

Но он обернулся у порога,

Свою решительность пленя.

Хотел ей крикнуть

"Ради Бога! Прости меня!

Верни меня!"

Но он не обернулся не подошел.

Она молчала, он ушел.

Ok, men, women, girls, boys, maybe "future" friends and everybody else. It is bad you do not know Russian pretty well. But at your numerous desire, here is an approximate translation of the poem.

Pride

He was leaving, she was silent,

But she wanted to cry out

“Stay! Let us begin from the beginning,

Let us try to begin.”

Nevertheless, she did not say that,

He was leaving, she was silent.

He turned back,

Captivating his decisiveness.

He wanted to give a shout

“For God's sake, forgive me!

Take me back!”

But he did not shout, did not approach,

She was silent, he has gone.

I know it does not sound as it should. Each poem is delicious just in its native language. All those feelings, exhalations and inhalations, thoughts and other impressions cannot be transfered to other languages, btu native, unless a professional translator takes it in his hands. Here is your the poem, you wanted that? If asked yourselves, do not critique it. PLZ.

MXD.