confused.fallen Posted March 11, 2007 Share Posted March 11, 2007 hello well im really shy, like im just on my first girlfriend now and i love her a bunch but before her i wrote a poem for another girl and got turned down, she thought it was very good but i still got owned, and the girl that im dating now when i shoed her she just said how she wished a guy would write her a poem so i did for her birthday and she really liked it, so im wondering if most girls enjoy poetry or if most dont? This one was for the first girl, the one who turned me down neither of my poems have a title though read em if youd like remember im only 17 so their not proly good. impossibly,fateally, addictingly, you sit their, preety as a picture thinking you know but unaware of the power you hold over me never sure what to do or say you bring both the worst and best out like a holy preist, you hoist my demons on your shoulders make me ligheter heavier maybe even more so the burden of my love, never to be realized nor vanquished it exists seemingly merely to exist to add incentive to a baren world nearly false hope but a thought a mere glimpse of the prize to come so i try, care, love openly to make it to the land the hallowed grounds from whence you came an angel in my eyes a ghost in my dreams im frozen at the sight of you yet burn with passion in your presense im the battle ground for two extremes unbrideled terror as well as courage both fully instilled by you This ones for my current G/F shimering with all the beuty your eyes bring a sense of wonder a loss for words i watch hear you speak but you dont understand your body tells volumes your warmth surrounds me a slave to your touch i sqeeze your hand and you squeeze back i see your hand and wonder what is the taste of heaven? i ponder this as i take your hand kiss it for the first time i understand thanks for reading and the comments that youll leave! byee Link to comment
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