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She just doesn't realise.


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More of a song i guess i hope you like it.

 

Early in the morning,

I think of you,

Your face is all around,

Theres no one else but you.

 

Then later in the afternoon,

I look i around to find,

My sweetheart, oh my baby,

She's so far behind.

 

Theres still a smile on her face,

Theres a crack in her heart,

She just doesn't realise,

No she ain't that smart.

 

I love you hunny,

More then any other girl,

Yet still you sit and wait,

Pretty as a pearl.

 

When will that pretty face of yours,

See theres more then you think to me,

No i ain't your average girl,

Not the sorta girl you'll always see.

 

Theres still a smile on her face,

Theres a crack in her heart,

She just doesn't realise,

No she ain't that smart.

 

I see your hidden tears,

Yeah i see your broken shell,

I want to fix your heart,

I just wish i'd caught you before you fell.

 

Oh baby i want to help you,

Open up your eyes,

Let you see whats around you,

Want to answer to your cries.

 

Theres still a smile on her face,

Theres a crack in her heart,

She just doesn't realise,

No she ain't that smart.

 

I won't let you go,

No sweetie you'll never be alone,

Just follow me,

Soon there'll be no reason to moan.

 

Happiness will flow around us,

Darling i'm make you smile,

Yeah your joy can last,

For more then just a little while.

 

Theres still a smile on her face,

Theres a crack in her heart,

She just doesn't realise,

No she ain't that smart.

 

Yet still she walks away,

Tears run down those cheeks,

They are the sorta tears,

That will last more then a few weeks.

 

Yeah and those scars on her wrists,

They may never fade,

Yet no one truly knows,

Why they were ever made.

 

Theres still a smile on her face,

Theres a crack in her heart,

She just doesn't realise,

No she ain't that smart.

 

Theres still a smile on her face,

Theres a crack in her heart,

She just doesn't realise,

No she ain't that smart.

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Hiya Rozi,

 

Again, I think this is a great poem!

One thing, if I may: how about focusing on where your talents lie?

 

Rozi's strengths:

writer of lovely poems

composer of sweet tunes

good friend (and has good friends)

expressive

thinker

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the list goes on and on

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