johnaintdoe Posted January 31, 2007 Share Posted January 31, 2007 Our Guidance Like a pedal, we are fresh and tender, untouched yet so close to ruination Like spirits, floating forever, unaffected by touch, Yet, we are people. Still... in the dark we wander, in light we comprehend. For now we slumber with disregard. When time comes to rise, little light is wanted in these carverns, to guide us towards the light. But ingrained in our culture, influences push us Sacrifice and selflessness, or selfishness and egotistic, we will all reach the light, the passage adjudges us. Your presense makes me flutter, your thoughts are just as aweful, Can we together, guide ourselves to our light, The light? Perhaps, the light is within us. I will never forget you how far we may be, my love. Link to comment
Ellie2006 Posted January 31, 2007 Share Posted January 31, 2007 My favorite line: "Perhaps, the light is within us" ... Thanks for sharing. Link to comment
yeawutever Posted February 2, 2007 Share Posted February 2, 2007 Cool poem, thumbs up!!!!!! Link to comment
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