SapphireStar Posted December 30, 2006 Share Posted December 30, 2006 Shred my skin and pierce my eyes Let me down, hear my cries Torture makes a person strong I've needed torture all along. Make me cry, save my tears Keep me in a cage for years Tear me up and watch me cave This kind of torture is what I crave Stretch me till I start to break Make it last, I'll feel the hate Build me up and let me fall Force me to taste my blood on the wall Throw me in and hold me under Make a scream that sounds like thunder Shred my skin and pierce my eyes Let me down, hear my cries Torture makes a person strong I've needed torture all along. Link to comment
yeawutever Posted December 31, 2006 Share Posted December 31, 2006 Your poem rocks!!!!!!!!! Link to comment
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted January 1, 2007 Share Posted January 1, 2007 wow hun thats really good. I really like it and really relate to it as well. Great job Link to comment
NKP Posted January 4, 2007 Share Posted January 4, 2007 Yeah great poem, i love it its awesome Link to comment
Newo Ikkin Posted January 4, 2007 Share Posted January 4, 2007 Throw me in and hold me under Make a scream that sounds like thunder Consider these lines a little more. Other than that, its a very good poem, SapphireStar. Kudos xxxx Link to comment
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