cant-stop-loving-her Posted December 1, 2006 Share Posted December 1, 2006 Can any1 think of a rhyming word to "back" that would mean sumthing like "day, afternoon, morning"..?? Bcuz, i wanted to fit it in with these lines: If I took you back, Back to that beautiful April day, When you heard me say, Happy Birthday, .... Link to comment
Daddy Bear Posted December 1, 2006 Share Posted December 1, 2006 off the top of my head, i can't think of one. but if you changed "back" to "away" (and thereforeeee avoid using it in consecutive lines), the problem would disappear. Link to comment
Dilly Posted December 1, 2006 Share Posted December 1, 2006 Good idea, SB. There are rhyming dictionaries... But if you go through the alphabet, you get one-syllable rhymers like hack, jack, lack, mack, nack, pack, rack, sack, tac, wack, and two-syllable rhymers like kayac, etc. Link to comment
easternsparrow Posted December 12, 2006 Share Posted December 12, 2006 Suggestion: Going back... to that beautiful April day, You'll once more hear me say: Happy Birthday Rita Link to comment
AwdreeHpburn Posted December 13, 2006 Share Posted December 13, 2006 How about.... back aft -(short for afternoon) If I took you back, to that April aft, Link to comment
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