SkylinesTurnstiles Posted September 28, 2006 Share Posted September 28, 2006 i havnt finished it yet but anyway.. For the touch of your skin is as gentle as silk The taste of you breath is playful The sound of your voice wants to make me scream Oh the feeling of lust My body is craving for the warmth of yours My lips longing for a taste My heart is pounding like a bass drum Oh the feeling of lust My mind is racing with 1000 thoughts I'm hoping you feel the same My hands are throbbing just to hold you Oh the feeling of lust Is the way that our eyes linger? Or the way your hair flicks Maybe the way your hand holds mine Oh the feeling of lust. Your voice is like a drug Running through my veins When do we meet again? Oh the feeling of lust Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NKP Posted September 28, 2006 Share Posted September 28, 2006 WOW thats just WOW thats so good, i love it so much hun Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeviantOne Posted September 28, 2006 Share Posted September 28, 2006 Wow. thats so powerful and deep. I'd love to see the finished product. I'll have to keep an eye on your poems, I've only read the one and I'm already hooked. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ms. Babydoll Posted September 29, 2006 Share Posted September 29, 2006 I really like it, it's very sweet! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SkylinesTurnstiles Posted September 29, 2006 Author Share Posted September 29, 2006 Thanks guys. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rightfromthestart Posted September 29, 2006 Share Posted September 29, 2006 jebus... that poem Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted September 30, 2006 Share Posted September 30, 2006 Go liza! Your poem was so good! I only found out today about matt... That is so sad, we grew up with that kid. Although we were never best friends or anything... Life is so horrible sometimes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SkylinesTurnstiles Posted September 30, 2006 Author Share Posted September 30, 2006 rightfromthestart - lol thanks Yeah i know it was really sad.His funeral was 2:30 yesterday I was so shocked when i found out Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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