Blissful Eternity

[Ms. Babydoll]

Are you willing to take a chance,

To take a chance with me?

Are you willing to give your heart,

Give your heart to me?

 

You are PERFECT in my eyes

So much that words could never describe

The way I feel when I'm with you

I feel so great inside

 

I gave my heart to you so long ago

And I don't think I'll ever get it back

You're haunting my every thought

But funny as it seems, I'm fine with that

 

Nothing is more BEAUTIFUL

Or more breathtaking than your smile

Not even the beauty of spring

Or maybe I'm just in denial

 

If I could have you

I would have everything I need

Just to hold you near for a moment

Would be a BLISSFUL ETERNITY for me

 

*I wrote this for anyone who's fallen head over heels for someone but doesn't know how to tell them, I suggest you just tell them how you feel, it's better than always thinking "what if?"*

[sumguy]

I'm still thinking "what if?" 6 years on... -_-

 

Really great poem, Babydoll. =)

[Ms. Babydoll]

thanks sumguy, I'm really sorry to hear that

[mgirl]

Thanks! I'm thinking of giving it to someone i am interested in. Or at least asking her out. I was thinking about it before, but your poem has inspired me. It was meant to be.

 

You are really great by the way!

[AnotherBrokenDoll]

Great job i know the feeling although its never been returned Oh well theres always next time lol. But thats an awesome piece of work!

[doyathink]

I really like it!

[Ms. Babydoll]

thanks heeps guys, mgirl I'm so glad I inspired you!!