I hope you are proud of me

[NKP]

You were my best friend

And the best dad in the world

But you left me

You gaved up the fight

Do you see the tears i cry?

Do you see my cuts?

Do you see how broken i am?

You said you love me

And that you will always be there for me

But your not here now

I look in the mirror i see you in me

I have your hair

I have your smile

I have your nose

Most of all i have your blood

And i am so proud i do

I am proud i was your little girl

I am proud you were my father

I am so greatful to have had you in my life

But now i just need to learn to live without you

I do believe you are watching over me

I hope you are proud of me

[doyathink]

Kita, WOW! That is so emotional and sad. I can't imagine loosing someone I love so much. Are you ok?

[SkylinesTurnstiles]

aww.thats so good

[Q10]

awesome kita!!! reaaalllly nice poem, I love it

[yeawutever]

Yea, that sure is a great poem!!!!!!!

[NKP]

Cheers everyone

[Steven1607307306]

You gave me chills while reading your poem. Kudos to that Kita, I felt the sorrow, yet thankfullness. I loved it.

[NKP]

Thanks ~~Steven~~

[Steven1607307306]

No problemo

 

I want to see more though!!

[PRSOV]

Kita,

 

I am sure your dad is watching over you now, and that he would be very proud of you.

 

Emotional poem.

[melrich]

Kita every poem you write about your Dad really affects me (being a father). Again I say your Dad would be so proud of you and I am sorry he did not live to see such a sensitive and intelligent woman growing up.

[NKP]

Thanks melrich