what is it about you?

[neva_black_n_white]

what is it about you?

 

i often wonder what it is about you

that keeps me intwined

in a fictional labrynth

of emotions

 

that suffocates any real justification,

realistic or rational thoughts

 

to promote an exposed

and naive fragment

of the person i strived

to create

 

i often wonder what it is about you

that enthralls me

into ever word you voice

even unit you speak

 

what is it that captures me

held down in a net

of confusion

simply too difficult to unsnare

 

i often wonder what it is about you

managing to know so much

yet for me to have spoken so little

 

i often wonder what it is about you

that keeps you intrigued

[PRSOV]

Great poem, excellent use of words...

 

How long did this take you to write?

 

Thank you for sharing

[neva_black_n_white]

Thanks. I really appreciate that.

 

It took me about ten minutes, I wrote whilst I was on here, it wasnt done in advance (like, if you take a look at verse three, its meant to be every not ever and ever not even on lines 3 and 4. I really should proof read these *smiles*... ive got a thing about not editing my work after its written, i seem to think its editing the emotion or reason behind the poem (if that makes sense)!!).

 

Thanks for responding.

 

neva x

[yeawutever]

10 mins and already creative, wow, that's what I call "very fast imagination"!!!!!!!!!!!!

[neva_black_n_white]

lol.. it's not imagination, it's more to do with how I feel at that moment in time, I guess it comes natural - it's only writing how im feeling really.

 

smiles**

 

thanks though.. thats really sweet x