Trough Lolly Posted July 31, 2006 Share Posted July 31, 2006 had a bit of a weird night last night and it got my mind swirling about so i gave my first ever poem a try... emotions so high, so yearning love...., couldnt bare but to cry.. always thought this could never be, thoughts like I wanted to die.. then one day, seemed my wish just may.. just may come true, true as can be met a girl, my hopes obscure within just grew. emotions so high, the future looked bright.. always dreamed things would turn out this way, never oh never was my heart so tight. at first, i was scared...sometimes frightened, scared i would lose you, you who enlightened.. made me happy, so cheerful with joy, your the reason my heart has heightened. emotions set free, blissful future i strove feeling at rest, my heart now grows, grows so strong, so fond of you.. so fond of you... the one i now love. Link to comment
darkness1235 Posted July 31, 2006 Share Posted July 31, 2006 It's quite good to be your first poem... hope you write more Link to comment
NKP Posted August 2, 2006 Share Posted August 2, 2006 yeh its really good for your first, keep writing some more Link to comment
yeawutever Posted August 2, 2006 Share Posted August 2, 2006 Very nice poems!!!!!!!!! Link to comment
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