Love me, love you.

[Kasai]

Err alright, I'm really bad with words, especially bad at poetry. But two of my best friends are really good at it. On of them has potential to go proffesional, and the other read at a poetry reading last friday. Anyways it was all so good I thought I should practice, I've got so many thoughts it's easy to at least do that. Enough babbling, just read the thing.

 

 

See I came back, for you

only you, to hold you

I'll save my words for other demons

but for now it's us

 

and other stuff

that really doesn't seem as bad now.

Yunno, I wonder if things might turn out okay for you,

afterall, I know if you thought about it

you'd deny

my... pleasant accusations

But for now don't think about you.

Just feel warm.

Feel the love that no real person could give you.

I was packed away all that time,

in you mind, it's awful there

All you had to do was call out,

and I came back.

The shadow of your personality,

all you wish you could be.

Here at you disposal

Love me.

 

Comments/criticism welcomed!

[yeawutever]

Yea, it's ok I'm not good with poems either. In fact some of them I don't quite understand the whole concept, I just pick up the main points, so don't feel bad. And by the way, it's not bad at all, cool poem.