venus777 Posted April 3, 2006 Share Posted April 3, 2006 It was a poem but i deleted it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emotional Posted April 3, 2006 Share Posted April 3, 2006 dooo you want advice or whats up? by the way i like the way you right!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
venus777 Posted April 3, 2006 Author Share Posted April 3, 2006 well, any thoughts about it are appreciated. thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kasai Posted April 3, 2006 Share Posted April 3, 2006 Why did you delete it? the title was interesting and made me want to read it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
venus777 Posted April 4, 2006 Author Share Posted April 4, 2006 I'm off beat with The harmony Of the earth tones The silence of Garbled electronic noise Transmits voices Of anger lust anguish Guttural utterances of Our animalistic urges I'm out of breath Out of reason To get out of bed I feel the weight Of self incrimination For lack of power To stop the machine From widespread murder Women raped Their limbs chopped Til they are unidentifiable Children sold Into sex trade slavery Men forced to fight For corporate greed Their families will receive Hardly an apology for The PTSD and blown up bodies And I just talk While eating vegan cookies Organic and dairy free And the sound of my voice Annoys me All I do Is go on and on Bout things we all know Intuitively I am immobilized Part of me Wants to give away my all Part of me Wants to hourd it all Guiltily Barely hanging on To financial security It'd be easy To slide back into poverty I don't want upward mobility I just want world peace (like Miss America) But the system Is paralyzing Who am I Reeally? Swept away I try to offer myself up My entirety But selfishly Hold on to parts of me Wanting to stow myself away In the recesses of loves embrace And have a family It seems At times Contradictory The impossibility Of living ethically Makes my mind revolve The same ideas perpetually Calmness of mind Achievable they say By meditation In all the motions of the day In the mountains far away From discordant voices But one can not have Peace while life forms scream As isolated as you may be From society Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
venus777 Posted April 4, 2006 Author Share Posted April 4, 2006 i don't know why i deleted it, didn't think people'd feel it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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