Ålter Ego Posted January 18, 2006 Share Posted January 18, 2006 My Greatest Enemy You are my greatest enemy You kick me when I'm down You erase my glowing smiles And turn them into frowns You are my greatest enemy You discourage me at my best You spit at my accomplishments Then dig into my flesh You are my greatest enemy Because of you nothing is what it seems You destroy all of my hopes You awake me from my dreams You are my greatest enemy Because of you I cannot live Because of you I cannot share Because of you I cannot give You are my greatest enemy You're the source of my fears You're the reason why I doubt so much And cry so many tears You are my greatest enemy You keep me from rising above It is because of you That I can never accept love You are my greatest enemy But if only I could see That the way to conquer you Is to conquer the enemy within me Link to comment
SuperDuper Posted January 18, 2006 Share Posted January 18, 2006 Well written - speaks a powerful message. Good work! Link to comment
Shadows Light Posted January 19, 2006 Share Posted January 19, 2006 wow... good stuff maynard Holy smokes this is good... hmmmm??? Link to comment
Dako Posted January 19, 2006 Share Posted January 19, 2006 I'll remember this one, it's tailor made for me. Link to comment
Shadows Light Posted January 19, 2006 Share Posted January 19, 2006 Was it you Dako.. who penned them? Link to comment
Ålter Ego Posted January 19, 2006 Author Share Posted January 19, 2006 No it wasn't him, tee hee. Thank you for the compliments guys. I may eventually have the courage to come out of the poerty closet, but this alter ego thing is kinda fun. Link to comment
Dako Posted January 19, 2006 Share Posted January 19, 2006 Shadows ight, If I did, I wouldn't be the basket case I am tonight! No, I suspect a few of our stellar members, you included. Link to comment
Ålter Ego Posted January 19, 2006 Author Share Posted January 19, 2006 Shadows ight, If I did, I wouldn't be the basket case I am tonight! No, I suspect a few of our stellar members, you included. Ha ha, you'll never guess. I am totally out of left field. Maybe I should hold a contest... Link to comment
Ålter Ego Posted January 19, 2006 Author Share Posted January 19, 2006 Darkblue...???? Nope. Here is a hint. I have never posted poetry as my original username. Link to comment
Dako Posted January 19, 2006 Share Posted January 19, 2006 Well, whoever you are, you're very talented. Link to comment
Ålter Ego Posted January 19, 2006 Author Share Posted January 19, 2006 I appreciate that, thank you. I am inspired by every one who has written their wonderful poems on this site, it is only now that I have gathered the courage to share a few of mine. Link to comment
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