a walk through gallows forest, i need oppinions

[dpressedone89]

i walk through the forest of my memories

see the shadows of friends long gone

hanging in the branches crying for a second chance

visions so painful i dont want to go on

 

they all gave up

they left this world far too soon

i wish i was with them

but something stopped me from dying in my room

 

the voices in my head

sometimes they seem too real

they call my name in the darkness

their presense i can feel

 

alive with the light in their eyes

they speak to me aloud

i hide my bloody hands

they say that they are proud

 

that i have lived

my life with no limits, that i held on

its not my time to go

i belong here until the coming dawn

 

then i leave this place

never to return again

so i scribble a letter

and i sign it goodbye my friends

-stitches

i need oppinions on this,

[jna35]

It kinda worries me. Are you O.K.? It's a beautiful poem, but a little on the dark side. It sounds like you have experienced a lot of loss.

[From_Now_On]

i liked it. dark...sad. And from earlier posts...I can tell it's full of real emotion. Take care of yourself. Hang in there. And keep writing. Really, good job.