F. Kiss

[B4551C]

Anxiously awaiting the culmination of desire, to quell

the deep sea of emotion which ne'er allows definement.

 

Your eyes, a portal to your soul, show me what you yearn to be.

Your touch, the power caused shudders through my spine;

Echoing and reverberating through my body and mind.

Just then I could feel your soul touch mine

ever so slightly.

 

At last, the lips of lovers danced an eternal dance.

A vortex of desire poured into my body, seeped

down through my chest and made me weak.

I held you tighter and you embraced

my shattered ego with a natural nurture.

The physical boundaries dissolved and fizzled away.

 

I looked in your eyes once more and suddenly

I came to a realization.

I like this girl.

[Phoenixfire]

I love it. It is short but articulated, flowing from one line to the next. It sounds like how my first kiss felt, and as a fellow writer I think that is all you can ask for, to other feel like you did