mustard1234 Posted February 1, 2013 Share Posted February 1, 2013 wheres the glass im breaking, honey im just tryna dance different drums. play counterpoint. keep steady beat above the noise. or at least the best we can. i dig how your pieces cut my lips a bit as i try to take 'em in. how much more fun it was til he figured out how much of her got stained on hands and skin in the swollensweethickeyesclosedark whispers of danger beneath the wet but i cant seem to show you, babe that i aint got no weapons. touch hot hearts good hell with the other stuff hard pressed, fresh starched sheets stacked and muffling perfectly good sound. found the wrong side of the rebel fire that i had to love to touch go. out to your deserts. your own way to find it. you know i love the way you look i think i mispronounce your heart. not sure what you heard but all i said was "baby, how you shine." Link to comment
SpottiOtti Posted February 7, 2013 Share Posted February 7, 2013 Oh, I like it so much. I felt displaced and uneasy and I reread it a few times and I feel like I'm in there, in a lovers' quarrel. I think it's brilliant. Link to comment
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