rina17 Posted October 25, 2011 Share Posted October 25, 2011 I have been reading this poem and im having a hard time understand it ( im going through a break up) please help? Plagued with a distant feeling Desolation paves the road thin Words spinning and reeling That paint the cornerstones of a mouth with sin Self-defense mechanisms engaged A brain on fire, equipped with rage The afterthought becomes the shock Fore the idea was the catalyst that sparked the flame Time fades in on itself And soon becomes jus a shadow of a memory Resurrection fails to trigger Even the slightest whisper Of a moment that remains pale in comparison Like a tiny scratch that goes unnoticed or a fly on the wall The blatant absence of emotion, only growing colder If only the feeling could be willed away But it's ever consuming, forming a stone-like mold in the place of a heart A degrading, yet uncanny sense of comfort attained from this mess In this scene, pride is swallowed for the sake of dignity And all the same, a mistake that feels pretentious A burden with no bearing held by the giver The receiver may finally collapse beneathe the weight With a sigh of relief or defeat? Link to comment
lalalollipops Posted October 25, 2011 Share Posted October 25, 2011 It seems to me about being betrayed and the aftermath of it? Link to comment
lalalollipops Posted October 25, 2011 Share Posted October 25, 2011 Actually now that I've read it I can explain every line for you. Just wait, I've got a bit of a head ache right now. Might explain it alittle later on tonight if I have time. Link to comment
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