civilservant Posted February 9, 2009 Posted February 9, 2009 Following on from my thread yesterday, here is the letter I have ended up composing: I think its light and airy, I've tried to keep it friendly but also included "inside jokes" that only the 2 of us will know (it might come accross as sarcasm, but it's really only a private joke). I hope that what she'll get from this is that I am more than reay to be around her again, and I want to be friends. Comments, criticisims, suggestions anyone?
KG Posted February 9, 2009 Posted February 9, 2009 CS, I like it! You kept it light, weren't gushy, and the inside jokes are a nice touch. Good luck! KG
yellow_sweater Posted February 9, 2009 Posted February 9, 2009 Very sweet. One suggestion: perhaps go a little lighter on the exclamation marks. There's at least one in every paragraph--it makes the note seem a little forced. Only use them when you actually have something to EXCLAIM. If it's just a statement, a period feels more natural and less forced. It is a very nice note. YS
civilservant Posted February 9, 2009 Author Posted February 9, 2009 A good point YS, and I'll amend it as such
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