Ideal Posted January 13, 2009 Share Posted January 13, 2009 Hey guys, I just wrote this poem because I needed to express my feelings. The healing process creates alot of emotions and I find it relaxing to write how I feel because it allows me to discover my true feelings...I'm not much of a writer, so my apologies if it's not very good lol. That Girl Do you remember that girl? The one who always smiled, laughed, and never cried The one who saw only beauty in the whole world Her naive heart believed love never died Why did she have to leave? What made her change into someone so cruel? Someone who she never wanted to be Perhaps it was because you made her into such a fool All the love she gave was so true You were everything she ever wanted But you decided you wanted someone new So you just left her to be alone and haunted Your words still in her mind Her love for you still in her heart She forgot how to be kind She fell apart Every warm memory of you was like a cold knife She couldn’t handle the pain any longer You were easily enjoying your life And so she decided it was time to become stronger She dried her tears and threw away your letter And took a walk in her favorite red dress Seeing the world made her feel better Suddenly she wasn’t such a mess Of course it still hurt her How could she forget her sorrow But at least now time could finally move faster Now she could look forward to tomorrow She changed, grew, and was reborn Never again will she let love take her over It hurts too much to be torn Love made her drunk and now she is sober Do you remember that girl? The one you walked on and let fall The one who begged for you in front of the whole world I don’t remember her at all Link to comment
Ideal Posted January 13, 2009 Author Share Posted January 13, 2009 That was awesome! Thank you! Link to comment
Artop Posted January 13, 2009 Share Posted January 13, 2009 I really like it. Thank you! Link to comment
Sadman84 Posted January 13, 2009 Share Posted January 13, 2009 I like your poem a lot. I like the twists and turns. You know before i made my songs, i'd write poems. You should think about making songs, its great to listen to what you wrote. Link to comment
goodkarma_1 Posted January 13, 2009 Share Posted January 13, 2009 That was great! Thanks! Link to comment
Ideal Posted January 13, 2009 Author Share Posted January 13, 2009 Aww, thanks guys for your great comments! Sadman84, I think I'll take your advice and try to write songs Link to comment
dstein Posted January 13, 2009 Share Posted January 13, 2009 This is beautiful, really. You have a talent. Link to comment
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