ResonanceTheory Posted January 11, 2009 Share Posted January 11, 2009 I woke up this morning with my breath sinking like a lonely ship, The bow breaking against the waves and all I could think of was how I'd lost you you, somewhere, gone from my eyes forever. I'll never have you again never feel your body on mine your hand on my hand your lips on my own I could not keep you even all the beautiful things we had weren't worth a second chance. 1 Link to comment
Daligal83 Posted January 11, 2009 Share Posted January 11, 2009 Did you and your boyfriend really break up or were you writing in general? It's a beautiful poem ResonanceTheory. Link to comment
tiredofvampires Posted January 11, 2009 Share Posted January 11, 2009 I can feel the weight of the sadness here, it's palpable...the lonely ship bit is really perfect. Haven't seen you here for a while RT....and if this poem reflects what's really happened to you, I'm feeling sad alongside you in this poem... Link to comment
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