tell me what you think

[xBlySSx]

adolecence

suttle epics

applauded by the legion

Sorrow stalks me

and the rain follows my every step

listen to this harmony

a simple beat

that grabs your focus

and sets you free

Listen and Hear

You want me to shut my ears

deaf to pain

Ignorance grips you by the neck

die with cause

as our age

bares shame

Indulge

Indulge

The burning flame

[neva_black_n_white]

the rhythm seems to change throughout but you do have a beat to the poem which entices the reader to carry on. well me anyway.

 

i thought it was a unique poem and interesting with how and what words you put together.

 

i liked it.

kel